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Wednesday, November 24, 2010
Editing the president
The president of our esteemed institution just sent out a Thanksgiving message. I thought this paragraph needed special attention from an editor:
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I'm glad to know you read these messages, Pat! Do you think they are downsizing in the president's office?
Yesterday I was looking at the plaque for the Bumpy Akaji sculpture in front of the new building on East-West Road, near the Biomedical Sciences Building. The plaque has an explanation of the sculpture, which includes the phrase ". . . takes precedent over . . ." This is really unfortunate because it is a powerful sculpture in a beautiful setting, but it feels diminished by the mistake.
My right eyebrow rose, too, as I read this curious passage in my inbox tonight. :)
Like Sarah Palin, our president may be a maverick who likes shooting from the hip. My guess is that she drafted the message, her secretary went over it once, and voila! It appeared in our mailboxes.
Thanks, Tisha, for bringing up the Akaji sculpture and plaque. I'll have to walk over and take a look.
As for Chad's raised eyebrow: is there anything more damning than that?
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