So I know we are supposed to edit instead of delete text, but a large portion of the text is redundant, misplaced, and illogical. I know it's late to be posting about this, but I think I'm going to have to claim clarity as my aim here. As well as keeping the author's colloquial, albeit cheesy style.
What do you think Pat? Am I going against what you want us to do, which is practice as much as possible our editing marks?
I feel torn, but I'm gonna go with my gut and with what I would do in a non-test situation.